The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts elucidate the precise information regarding usage of water by various means which is measured in percentage in six regions of the world.

Overall, the pie charts highlight that the agriculture sector made the highest contribution to total water usage majorly in four regions named South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. Moreover, industries made up the second most significant sector for water consumption in North America and Europe. However, the domestic category made the lowest share for all six regions in terms of consumption levels.

First of all, Agriculture being the most popular sector in four regions, depicted an upward trend in South America, South East Asia, Africa and Central Asia. In South America, this sector accounted for slightly more than a three-fifth part of total water utilisation. Also, for the regions South East Asia and Africa the consumption level rose to 81% and 84% respectively, which then reached a peak with 88% in central Asia making it the crucial occupation in the region.

Subsequently, in the developed nations namely North America and Europe. Industries played a significant role. So, the proportions for water usage in the former nation saw noticeable figure with nearly one-half and latter one with just over one-half of total usage. In contrast, domestic usage recorded extremely low rates with less than 10% in Africa, Central and South East Asia regions, and saw a slight rise in rates in North America, Europe and South America with 13%, 15% and 19% individually.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, in contrast, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.228 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62876701136 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4093656136 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094753495643 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454577730327 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529199794062 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856406238648 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655047678109 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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