Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required
There is a belief by some people that it should be made mandatory for high schools to indulge students in various unpaid social services such as charitable works, mentoring young children and many more. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement because these activities are beneficial for students to develop their social behaviosral skills and leadership abilities along with their studies.
To commence with, it is one of the responsibilities of the school to shape its students to become a well-defined individual towards the society. Additionally, schools should inculcate various activities as a part of their curriculum such as community walks and running campaigns apart from education. In other words, these schools should focus on the communication skill which is the main aspect of social behavioral skills. For instance, high school organizations should promote community walks so that students foster a friendly environment and can learn many new things from their neighborhood by interacting with the people irrespective of their age.
Furthermore, these social activities not only shape the student’s decorum, also it will boost the leadership qualities among the students. Moreover, these qualities will aid for better employment opportunities in the future after graduation from their high school. For example, educational bodies should consider the notion of taking mentoring classes to the unprivileged children in remote areas by their students. Moreover, it will encourage them with immense confidence for their future endeavours and improve their communication skills which lead them to acquire better job opportunities in firms.
In contrast, some parents are sceptical about these works, as students might lose their concentration which impacts their academic performance. However, it is based on individual level of perception for these social services. It would be better if parents and schools are on the same platform to encourage this type of work in order to make a better future.
To sum it all, the argument which demands the involvement of high school students in various social services will aid them to foster an affable environment in the society and enhance the student’s leadership skill which will drive them into popular firms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54131054131 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93988381734 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3803090446 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.928571429 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0338426398052 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0144748646976 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.017283028034 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0220813187309 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015372196514 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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