Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my perspective, sports and social activities at universities are as important as classes and libraries and should receive a similar amount of financial support. Sports help students be healthier and teach them how to socialize with other students and be more responsible. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint my case.
The first thing to mention is that sports and social activities can improve the health of students. At universities and colleges, students face a lot of homework and assignments that need to be done. Since these projects have specific deadlines, students can be under pressure of stress and tension. In this situation, engaging in sports activities can help students release their negative energy and open their minds, which is essential for their health. For instance, when one of my friends was in the university, he stressed our final project assignment. This stress did not let him focus and made him sick. After a while, he became a football team member, and his previous problem never happened to him again.
Another point worth mentioning is that students learn how to socialize with other people. Students who are engaged in social and sports activities learn how to talk and interact with other students. Moreover, their ability to make friends is far better than students who are studying all the time. Therefore, since the students interact with others, their ability to socialize with other people is better. Also, students attaining in group activities become more responsible because every member of a group has a role which has to do by them. For example, students in a group study have to help each other enhance their knowledge and fix their mistakes. These kinds of responsibilities are helpful in future life.
Finally, since sports activities are substantial for students at universities and colleges, they must receive equal financial support for two main reasons. The first reason is that the students can be more healthy, and the second reason is that they gain the ability to socialize with other people and be more responsible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13529411765 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71883091098 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2033105849 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8947368421 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20470716337 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703139551521 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985497098219 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161466038718 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943668588045 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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