Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different views about whether studying at university or getting a job is more suitable after high school. I believe that the profession's success depends on everyone's choice, not regarding whether or not you studying at university.
Some people think that getting a university or college certification is the more certain to get a job in the future. To begin with, learned knowledge at junior school are not eligible for the specific position jobs. The occupations regarding technical, medical or education industry and so on require that you have a university or college certification. Moreover, the university environment is appropriate for the student to gain both knowledge and skills. University is similar to a mini social in which students are likely to participate in most activities such as teamwork, social activities, etc. To elaborate, students can contact many kinds of people and be in charge of many different positions as leaders in a team, members in a club, etc. They will learn how to become an upstanding adult and ready to step into society.
There are many reasons that people want to get a job straight after school. They can not feel the interest to study at university or college. For instance, some people prefer to establish their own company to business. They expect that step into their life early and earn money fastly. Besides, some people have creative thinking that outweighs traditional knowledge and have the ability to implement them. They choose another way to become a successful person in the future. For example, Bill Gates left Harvard University to pursue his technology passion. He came over many challenges and difficulties to build a strong company like Microsoft.
In conclusion, having a successful career in the future depend on continuous effort and passion. Studying at university or not is not essential as long as appropriate for you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professions'' or 'profession's'?
Suggestion: professions'; profession's
...e after high school. I believe that the professions success depends on everyones choice, no...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ends on everyones choice, not regarding whether or not you studying at university. Some peopl...
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Line 2, column 677, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...any kinds of people and be in charge of many different positions as leaders in a team, members...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15210355987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86485097344 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9152678557 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7894736842 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288999324576 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845160764228 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080804610698 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183133479692 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620363367742 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.