To what extent has the Internet made life more convenient? Give reason to your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that with the advent of the Internet our modern life has been advanced significantly, even though it also has certain detrimental effects. However, for the merits of it, the Internet has become an integral part of our daily life from studying to working or even communicating. In this essay, I will attempt to outline some key reasons for this.
First and foremost, the way we obtain information has almost fully changed. If we compare the ways we search for information to the past 20 years, it would be a far cry. The Internet has provides us with the ability to access a much wider scale of information with the speed of light. For example, Google, an Internet searching tool, could provide millions of search results for each of the keywords the users enter. Therefore, people could be updated with the news or information all around the world with a small device connected with the Internet. Furthermore, in the context of the pandemic, many works and studies are procrastinated. The Internet might offer us many opportunities such as studying online or working from home via the Internet to overcome this problem. Thus, many life has had been saved and many works have been done faster and safer.
Finally, our geographic distance is diminished because of the advancement in communication through the Internet. It has never been easier for people to connect with their friends or families wherever they are in the world. Social media, for instance, a service rely on the Internet, supply us with a platform to keep in touch with our colleagues, friends almost 24/7. Surprisingly, patients are now could be cured via the advice given by doctors on the Internet. Consequently, people who travel or live abroad could feel less lonely and secure when they could connect with their family whenever they want.
In conclusion, the Internet certainly facilitates our life in many aspects such as socializing or learning as well as giving us a measure to combat the pandemic at the moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ternet to overcome this problem. Thus, many life has had been saved and many works ...
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Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lives'.
Suggestion: many lives
...ternet to overcome this problem. Thus, many life has had been saved and many works have ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94100294985 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71833029994 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6757564189 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5294117647 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878778477577 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311717026762 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281669666379 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654381345744 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244096266113 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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