Task 2: People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
In recent years, many issues in big cities have become in a matter of discussion. Living in urban areas always occurs many big challenges in daily routine. In this essay, I will examine the causes why facing problems in cities is occurring and offer some solutions.
There are two main causes why people in large cities have difficult problems to happen. Firstly, an increasing population in urban places is a common problem now. For example, many people in other areas move to big cities to carry out their goals such as finding job opportunities, contact advanced education and treatments in hospitals. Thus, overpopulation is a huge problem because it leads to people who do not have accommodation, employment and healthcare. In addition, traffic congestion also become matter to take place everyday. To illustrate, many people in Vietnam are more increasing the demand of using vehicles to traveling. As a result, a large number of private transports is not move smoothly in peak time which takes about 30 minutes or an hour to driving.
There are numerous solutions to tackle this issue. First of all, the government should be not only encouraging international companies to invest in countryside but also providing small money to cover people’s lives. It can limit people to migrate to urban areas for finding jobs when creating chances in the countryside. As a result, it reduce high pressure of overpopulation to make balance. Furthermore, the state should recommend people to use public transportation such as trains and buses. This is because buses can contain about 30 or 40 passengers, rather than using personal vehicles as cars and motorbikes. It restrict both traffic jams and gas emissions from transports.
In conclusion, nowadays people stay in urban places usually face a variety of problems in their life. In my view, the best solution is that should encourage foreign industries to expand in rural areas because it can provide job opportunities for people to improve their lives and avoid migration to cities.
- Task 1 The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901
- Task 2 People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists teacher are the most successful Discuss both and give your opinion 56
- Task 1 The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901 73
- Task 2 People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...estion also become matter to take place everyday. To illustrate, many people in Vietnam ...
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Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ing vehicles to traveling. As a result, a large number of private transports is not move smoothly...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...ces in the countryside. As a result, it reduce high pressure of overpopulation to make...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'restricts'?
Suggestion: restricts
...nal vehicles as cars and motorbikes. It restrict both traffic jams and gas emissions fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13855421687 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88935030552 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4037977837 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7894736842 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333259309788 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872039032703 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683951195307 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193436647916 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668002660128 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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