Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some that extinction of certain plants and animals are the major environmental hazards nowadays while others claimed that more than this lot of other problems there in our environment.However, in my opinion, other environmental catastrophe would be the most concern in this time.
On the one hand, indeed there are many kinds of species like vegetation and animals are destroyed or lessen this time. Their economical and habitual value also might be mitigate due to the extinction. It is indispensable to control or protect such species for better nature and habitat. For instance, bamboo has numerous qualities like prevention of soil erosion, loss of this plant adversely affect the neutral situation of environment. Similarly, supporters thinks that loss of these species as the culprit of natural disasters and croplands deficiency. For example, some sort of animals or bees are the major influence of poor yield of many crops.
On the other hand, people who claimed about other problems are floods, drought, landslides and global warming would be the important environmental crisis in recent days. It is true because such disasters often destroy the normal circumstances of the environment. For example, many people and creatures are frequently suffering from these hazards in terms of habitat loss, food shortage, and so on. Furthermore, global warming and drought would be a universal problem and consideration of this might make a great change in future.
To sum up, loss of some valuable plants and animals would be exactly a major concern though, other hazards may lead to detrimental effect on environment rather than missing some species.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...other problems there in our environment.However, in my opinion, other environmental cat...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'species'?
Suggestion: species
...ne hand, indeed there are many kinds of species like vegetation and animals are destroy...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ation of this might make a great change in future. To sum up, loss of some valuable p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, sort of, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3007518797 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93066272199 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.061857274 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296717170769 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930231390484 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833566262991 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185112531967 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826028066508 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...other problems there in our environment.However, in my opinion, other environmental cat...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'species'?
Suggestion: species
...ne hand, indeed there are many kinds of species like vegetation and animals are destroy...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ation of this might make a great change in future. To sum up, loss of some valuable p...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, sort of, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3007518797 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93066272199 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.061857274 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296717170769 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930231390484 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833566262991 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185112531967 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826028066508 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.