Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
A thriving nation should not merely be regarded based on fundamental factors of financial state or literacy but in coordination with arts. Nevertheless, many counterarguments suggest arts subsidies should be unsponsored as there are more essential aspects that need investing in. I completely disapprove of this idealism, and the forthcoming paragraphs will elaborate on my viewpoints.
There is a correlation between arts and life. Dating back to the prehistoric period, arts have remarkably marked their presence by co-existing with humans in traditional customs, primitive antique artifacts, and lifestyle patterns. Primarily, art reflects the culture of a country, which means that it itself helps promising generations preserve spiritual values, as well as enhance humans’ understanding and reverence to their origins. Otherwise, arts vary distinctively in every nation, so investment in arts would not represent a waste but potentially stimulate economic growth in the tourism sector. Travelers will be held spellbound by the marvelous, astounding culture, in addition to particular extraordinary heritages.
Art investments can do wonders as they can ameliorate mental health. A rapid invasion of cutting-edge technologies seems to take a toll on all ages, rendering them in fatigue and bewilderment, so putting brakes on working is essential to stabilize self-esteem and productivity. One archetype referring to this point is the art gallery in Ho Chi Minh City called S&S, which has currently proclaimed its success in reducing anxiety in people. By displaying a vast collection of self-portrait drawings with profound messages provided, visitors find it majestic and intriguing because they are sympathized and reassured with encouragement written by anonymous.
Briefly, governments should take this action into consideration as arts portray a pivotal role in promoting one country’s culture and nurturing humans’ inner sentiments.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to promise' or 'promise'.
Suggestion: to promise; promise
...untry, which means that it itself helps promising generations preserve spiritual values, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87323943662 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3429496613 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704225352113 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8835542653 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161731844712 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516711554338 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239874000009 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927322203405 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00686951634475 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to promise' or 'promise'.
Suggestion: to promise; promise
...untry, which means that it itself helps promising generations preserve spiritual values, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87323943662 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3429496613 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704225352113 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8835542653 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161731844712 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516711554338 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239874000009 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927322203405 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00686951634475 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.