The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that people are using social media more often rather than going face-to-face interaction with many people in society. In my opinion, this argument has more advantages than disadvantages and this essay will provide suitable explains with examples.
First of all, there are a lot of beneficial effects of using social media. The first positive effect is that it saves lots of time since they can talk with each other everywhere they want just by using phones or computers. For example, Facebook, Instagram, and tweeter, and so on are social applications that help people communicate with each other easily by sending messages, texts, or seeing other faces through the screen of phones or computers. Secondly, social media is extremely convenient so it attracts people to use it usually. This is because it gives information to people quicker and social media creates opportunities for people who have to go to a far distance and can not see their friends, relatives. Therefore, instead of waiting to see their friends directly to have a chat, people can use social media apps to send texts or call them.
On the other hand, social media still exist few drawbacks. The first negative effect is that it reduces people's relationships, especially the elderly who do not know to use modern technologies. As a result, the elderly will feel isolated since their children just concentrate on texting and do not communicate with them. In addition, if people use social media regularly, they might get addicted to using social apps. This can cause them a lot of problems such as body health, mental, and so on. For instance, when teenagers focus on social media for nearly a day, their eyes will hurt badly and they might have blinded in the future if they do not quit this hobby.
In conclusion, I believe that social media plays an important role in people's lives, and despite the disadvantages, the advantages of social media still outweigh and will be more and more popular in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92581602374 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63607057739 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.474624801 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322489346143 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119745356033 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920769800286 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21237710322 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049708751754 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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