Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many languages in the world have been disappearing year after year, especially ethical communities in small islands or remote areas. Some people believe this phenomenon will not have a great impact on our society, besides, the fewer languages we speak, the simpler life we live. From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement, but sometimes it is not a perfect world we are imagining.
The fewer languages we speak, the more benefits come to our living world. The first advantage is that the connection between countries and people who speak different languages will be strengthened if we understand and use the same language. For example, the EU, which consists of more than 20 countries, and each one has its own language, however, English is chosen to become a community language. Moreover, if people use the same language, the economic and social barriers will be broken, there are more job opportunities for workers and exchange students. Books and education systems will develop significantly and save our national budget.
In contrast to the statement, those minus communities and their languages play a crucial role in diversifying our world with special identities. If a language vanishes, the whole nation will become extinct forever because it will lose its distinctive features as well as culture. Like the Champa Kingdom in the south of Vietnam, their architect and construction knowledge had disappeared and left great unanswered questions.
In conclusion, the fewer languages we speak will be an advantage for society and economic development, but somehow its extinction will be an important loss for our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 380, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... sometimes it is not a perfect world we are imagining. The fewer languages we speak, the mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28352490421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89490922232 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2859465728 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274735767006 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10101254615 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607135085116 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172668002958 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490778517545 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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