In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In most countries, it is neither having a home or renting a house is not really different. In the younger age people are not decided yet where to live or what kind of life style do they prefer. So people choose to live as a nomadic life in younger age.
On the one hand, if a person who has a stable job and earning enough money than they should choose to own a house near their job location. Renting a house is decreasing one's income after a long time. There is also alternative choice to own a home. That is deposit for a certain amount of percentage of entire cost and pay monthly for a few years. Then they officially own a home after they paid all the debt.
On the other hand, people who like to live as a nomadic life should not buy an expensive house but they may travel and rent many kinds of house along their journey. In this 21st century, a lot of IT nomadic worker like to live by traveling many countries and work for their life. For those kind of personality, they buy a house without actually living in it is totally wasted. There are also some draw back while renting such as sharing with other people in a same house is a little bit difficult for privacy.
In my perspective, I would try to live many kind of house in my younger age and after I know myself more, I would buy a house. So before buying a house we should save enough money for our dream house.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'houses'?
Suggestion: houses
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, really, so, then, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18421052632 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21584254091 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6610505857 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154133414239 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605101952992 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310365495082 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896448031648 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473293164637 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.