The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The past Century of smoking and cigarettes always becomes a subjec of debate. although, several peoples are neglectful and they coutinued with that behavior of permanent so that giving negative impact for healthy of body.
Therefore, it has two the main cause as nicotine and it is built behavior smoking by habit. Accordingly this is giving a big impact for environment and living society. Firstly, the nicotine make people as drugs consumption because it has chemical subtance which make number of people to repeatedly activities and it is fact which i saw in my environment. Secondly, the fact or myfth is things a real what have i seen about behavior of smoking as habit. The main cause is counfortable of behavior as the current is smoking so that it is difficult to stopping by them behavior.
Even though, there are several way to stopping negative behavior for somebody are user of cigarettes. The first step is rehabilition of user. For example, there are heavy cigarettes addict has been using cigarettes as daily of activities. We can working together with local government to register and rehabilition by them behavior step by step then when the behavior is reduced we can release them. The finally step is local government should to take authority of policy for market of cigarettes with the price increasing of selling. Consequently, this will reducing cigarettes of user to buy and somking so that i think these are all alternative of solution which appropriate based on my experience.
In conclution, the people of difficul are stopping by smoking of cigarettes because it has chemical subtances as nicotine and it is built smoking behavior of cigarettes by habit. Although, the are way to reducing all of it with it do rehabilition for every user of cigarettes and authority of cigarettes to take policy increasing the price of cigarettes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03883495146 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.916308346 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453074433657 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0513904795 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186146915843 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683722484651 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381879696427 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122342963913 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252417173196 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.