Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Undergraduate students have been burdened with taking classes like english, history and art for many years. Students, who are not majoring in any of the fields under the Humanities banner, should not have the obligation of studying those courses becauuse it doesn't relate to their field, it will save them time, and it reduces cost college tuition.
Students majoring in Business and in the Sciences should not have to take Humanities courses because they do nothing in helping the students learn about their field of study. Why would a college student who's studying Kinesiology need to learn about Shakespeare? A Kinesiology student would never use the information learned about Shakespeare in a professional situation. They were would be many things that students are forced to learn about in humanities classes that would never use later down the line.
Furthermore, not having to take Humanities classes would save a lot of time for students. It would mean one or more less classes they would have to take. These classes take away time that can spent on other courses that are more meaningful to the major of the student. It also means more study time toward their more important classes.
Finally, Business and Science students could save a decent amount of money on tuition and books. A major problem that occurs with many college students is debt from student loans. Not being forced to take humanities courses can shed a major a load off students backs once they graduate because they'd have less debt once they graduate. The tuition and cost of books alone could save these students thousands of dollars.
Overall, students should not be forced into having to take humanities classes because they almost never give the students meaningful information for their future jobs. These classes become more of a cost and time burden then anything else. Most students go to college to be able to achieve a certain job that they could not get without a college degree, so students should have to take unwanted classes if they don't aid them in their future job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99421965318 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41074421306 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471098265896 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0134929891 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30771967649 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109676089922 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867699342139 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187874573647 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333339942343 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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