Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent days, there is a general consensus that practicing to adapt with climatic shift is a better solution than trying to prevent it. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement because it can make people suffer from a higher risk of extinction , moreover, we are able to solve this matter gradually from now.
The first reason why I believe that finding a way to live with climate change is an inferior idea because if this phenomenon lasts for a long time, it will put people on the verge of disappearance. As according to scientists, climatic variation leads to a lot of detrimental effects on our environment such as global warmings which results in the increase in sea levels and the narrow of glacier and icebergs. For example, the icebergs of Greece which provide water for 500 millions people are shrinking about 37meters per year, moreover, some of the islands and villages located on the seashore in Indonesia are predicted to be covered by the oceans.
The second reason is that we still have time to tackle this serious problem. There are a lot of measures which the government and individuals can take to prevent or mitigate climatic shift. The primary solution is to find a best way to cut down the amount of carbon dioxide released to the atmosphere on a daily basic because it is the main factor which contribute to global warmings. For instance, the authorities should impose strict rules on the companies to obligate them decrease their carbon emissions during production , apart from that, individuals should be encouraged and propagated to use public transports rather than cars or motorbikes.
In conclusion, the completely disagree with adapting to climate changes, as we not only have enough time to solve this problem but also living with it can lead to many dangerous matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
In the recent days, there is a general consensus that practicing to adapt with climatic ...
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Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practicing adapting'.
Suggestion: practicing adapting
...days, there is a general consensus that practicing to adapt with climatic shift is a better solutio...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... suffer from a higher risk of extinction , moreover, we are able to solve this mat...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...king about 37meters per year, moreover, some of the islands and villages located on the sea...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... shift. The primary solution is to find a best way to cut down the amount of carb...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...their carbon emissions during production , apart from that, individuals should be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91233766234 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6935020278 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0741158041 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212944408364 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787522725639 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577393088415 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129505812456 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353972127246 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.