Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Monotonous are one strong reason why some people are no longer paying attention to ads. While it is more acceptable, I believe that advertising is better option to create product top of mind.
Repeated shows when people watching advertisement, making it boring, leading to become less interesting. How could this happen? Since the customer demand now increase, and many producers want to introduce their masterpiece massively, broadcasting same ads repeatedly can help this situation, but it makes people’s boredom. For example, the Indomie product ads with recorded scenes airing on many platforms, such as TV-ad, Instagram-ad, and YouTube-ad, but many people are more likely to ignore all of them, as they had memorized many informations related to the Indomie ads. Nevertheless, I believe that advertising is excellent decision to make it well-known extensively.
However, many people believe that advertising is very successful way of building product top of mind in people’s brain, persuading more individuals to become loyal customers, and buying product continuously. This is to say, many companies nowadays are diligent in making creative advertisement, and playing it for a million times in some medias, causing people thinking that product 24/7. Evidence suggests, if Indonesian people being asked about the most scrumptious noodle, 98% of them have recommended to buy Indomie product, as it had been number one in Indonesian people mind due to Indomie's ads in all ad-medias. Therefore, people will order that product repeatedly without thinking twice or comparing to other brand.
In conclusion, although many people ignoring ad impressions, advertising product can be quickly spread-widened. If possible, is there any chance to produce advertisement with more attracting contents?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended buying'.
Suggestion: recommended buying
...st scrumptious noodle, 98% of them have recommended to buy Indomie product, as it had been number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63970588235 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10213085321 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4628491236 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207412653078 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834914340711 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579834311107 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144918925431 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566165667438 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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