“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern times, the issue of zoo has become a matter for discussion there are those who say that the walls around the animals is kind of violence and it humiliates the creatures, however, others, believe that zoo can keep a lot of species safe. In this essay I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Speaking generally, there are number of reasons why people believe that zoos should be banned. Perhaps the main reason why animal park is in inhuman is because there is a strong possibly that wild animals get some kind of illness from the the human beings. For example, a terrible infection spread between group of monkeys caused deaths in over hundreds of them. A further point in favor of closing zoos is that mostly the zoos Doesn’t have the right environment for the animals that come from different regions. if they bring a Siberian wolf that to used to the cold weather, The wolf probably will not adapt in it is new place which can leads to death.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for idea that animal parks contributes in saving and fertilization lots of rare breeds. The fundamental reason why some experts think that zoos can provide protection to endangered animals is because some animals face lots of changes such as urban extension and climate changes that put them in serious dangerous conditions. Secondly, the government could gain extra income from these projects.
In conclusion this is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. Having considered both sides of the issue, I would argue that we should close the zoos and set free all animals in their in the wildlife then we can protect them in their homes like the safaris in Africa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73841059603 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38307786884 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8946394663 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314062843322 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952614173429 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775478512315 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170484539613 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352901968668 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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