Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that there should be a solution for adapting to climate change rather than looking for the prevention. This essay will firmly disagree that ignoring changes in weather pattern then accepting to live with it is not a promising way. The essay will first discuss that more and more fatal consequences are threats to human, then it is not too late for human to take action against climate change.
Choosing not to stop climate change means that several dangers can threaten people’s life consequently. It is claimed that climate change is the root of severe weather patterns such as typhoon, dramatic drought, and high frequent flood. The decision to co-exist with climate change may bring people into unsafe situations when there is high possibility to accidentally become victims of natural disasters. Moreover, the sudden change in climate even create new types of diseases which can be out of control. For instance, recently, the temperature is getting higher and higher because of climate change, which results in millions of residents in Africa suffer from hunger and lack of nutrition. Extreme and long lasting drought pose a threat to their survive.
It is never too late for human to cooperatively fight against climate change. The convincing reason why people need to avert but not get used it is simply because it is our fault to give birth climate change. Therefore, we are heavily responsible for what we have done if we look forward to a better planet to live on for next generations. Imagining that climate still exists, it will continue to cause misery and how many deaths in the next centuries? In recent years, several environmental projects have been initiated throughout the world. The campaign ActNow to deal with climate change by United Nations and annual Greener World seminar to search for promising project to reduce plastic in Vietnam are prime examples.
In conclusion, co-existence with climate change is only temporary as we can correctly estimate the risks from that and noticeably, there is still a chance for us to start over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly because it is our fault to give birth climate change. Therefore, we are heavil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07871720117 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61220910534 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0693775937 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223805590568 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714780252445 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486842763682 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135060590005 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172167843085 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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