Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is often argued that transferring to the regional areas in the suburban areas would be better for the large organization and factory industry. This essay will first discuss that reducing initial cost and increasing of facilities extension are the main advantages, while far from the city center and difficulty of employee’s traveling are the principal disadvantages.
On the one hand, one of the benefits of moving outside the downtown is that can fade the company’s cost and investment on the property, namely renting expenses. That is to say, when the company changes its location to another area where it is not dense with a crowded population, the cost of the company’s monthly payment will be cheaper due to less demand for the land. Moreover, the company will have more spaces which it can easily expand more facilities, compared to the limited areas inside the city center. The gym is exemplified of new convenient service, provided to enhance staff satisfaction by the company. As a result, all of these will assist the company to gain a competitive advantage over the competitors because they can bring this saving money to invest in other necessary assets instead, such as human resources, sales and advertisement.
On the other hand, the obvious drawback is that it is not in a prime location and farther from its urbanization. This means that this factory is hard to attract talented people to work with because the factory is far from home areas for workers and their families. In addition, it is inconvenient for employees to commute to their destination, which they may take more time to arrive in, even there is no traffic congestion. Thereby, this represents that the company will need to reschedule the working hours, leading to affect overall organization structure.
In conclusion, although the company, leaving from locating inside the metropolis to the rural place, will receive some sound advantages, it also has the disadvantages as distancing and traveling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13846153846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8814099113 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4851881198 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187019525047 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621727099496 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719804331962 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103659453605 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556914369041 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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