The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity generated and utilized by the top ten countries in 2014.
Overall, China and the United States were the biggest producers and consumers of electricity, whereas Korea was at the bottom of the rank.
As can be seen from the figures, while China produced 5,398 kWh, the United States produced 4,099 kWh. Russia was the third-highest producer of electricity, generating 1,057 kWh. However, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany manufactured electricity between 500 and 1,000 kWh. The Republic of Korea generated the least amount of electricity, with 485,1 kWh.
Furthermore, the consumption of electricity followed the same patterns as the generation of energy. The top three electricity consumers were China, the United States, and Russia, which used 5,322 kWh, 3,866 kWh, and 1,038 kWh, respectively. Japan and India came in fourth and fifth, with a power consumption of 856.7 kWh and 698.8 kWh, respectively. The remaining countries utilized less than 500 kWh of electricity, with the Republic of Korea using the least, with 449.5 kWh. Except for Germany, which created 526.6 kWh and consumed 582.5 kWh, all of the countries’ power outputs exceed their consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 546, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...eated 526.6 kWh and consumed 582.5 kWh, all of the countries’ power outputs exceed their c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, third, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44329896907 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85136822874 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.238820669 43.030603864 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.0 112.824112599 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929829954191 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763508670732 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101105879458 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961883044759 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120619695246 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.