The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives some information about the number of production and consumption of electricity in ten distinct countries in 2014.
In general, the rate of production in all of countries have higher than consumption except in Germany in 2014. The china and United States have significantly high production and consumption rather than others and Germany and Korea Rep. located in lowest place.
As can be seen, tow China and United States countries located in the first and second place by ordered 5398 and 4099 billion kWh production and 5322, 3866 billion kWh consumption. From Russia which both production and consumption sharply dropped and was in third place to France the production rate reduced slightly about 5000 billion kwh. In France and Brazil produce approximately equal electricity and last country has lowest production rate by 485.1 billion kwh. The people use electricity alike production rate and in all countries consumption was lesser than production except Germany.
As a result, the last seventh countries have under 1000 billion kwh electricity produce and use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the lowest'.
Suggestion: in the lowest
...hers and Germany and Korea Rep. located in lowest place. As can be seen, tow China and U...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the lowest'.
Suggestion: has the lowest
...tely equal electricity and last country has lowest production rate by 485.1 billion kwh. T...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ricity alike production rate and in all countries consumption was lesser than production ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77894813395 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.998946087 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216987843581 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109911615323 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964442717673 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166965242026 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109469175864 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.