The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph compares the production and consumption of electricity between ten countries in 2014.
Overall, the production of electricity in nine countries can satisfy the meet of electricity consume, except for the Germany. Moreover, China and the USA are the two countries which produce and consume the most electricity in the world, which far above the other countries.
It is clear that the production of electricity in Germany is 526.6 billion kWh and the consumption is over the production, which is 582.5 billion kWh. However, the production of electricity is exceed the consumption in the other nine countries.
Meanwhile, the production of electricity and consumption of electricity in China is the most in the world, which can produce 5398 billion kWh and consume about 5322 billion kWh. The second countries is America, which can produce 4099 billion kWh and consumption 3866 billion kWh. The production of electricity and consumption of electricity of Russia follow close by the UAS, which are 1057 billion kWh and 1038 billion kWh respectively.
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 73
- In many countries more and more people buy a wide range of household goods like televisions microwave ovens and rice cooker Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- In some cities governments have tried to reduce traffic congestion For instance they have imposed a congestion tax during rush hour Do you think this development is positive or negative 56
- As global trade increases many goods even some daily goods are exported to another country which includes long distance transport during shipping Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exampl 89
- Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purpose Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exceeded'.
Suggestion: exceeded
...wever, the production of electricity is exceed the consumption in the other nine count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, second, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32544378698 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01285134129 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396449704142 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.449746861 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.0 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170506682692 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138297579393 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080690208178 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155115305753 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763717006439 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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