Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days.
To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Certain countries have introduced a number of days when personal vehicles are not allowed to enter the city center so as to encourage the use of public transport. Although such practice may cause some delays in business, overall it will help alleviate global warming.
Apparently, the prohibition of private means of transport could lead to financial losses, especially in the shipping sector. it is freight service that is at the core of any economy in the world as it enables the delivery of various merchandise, such as raw materials or essential consumer goods, to not only customers but also the manufacturers. Moreover, such transactions help sustain the expansion of an economy. Therefore, were the policy of vehicle-free days widely approved across the world, there would be numerous postpones, thereby inflicting damages on the economic well-being of a country.
However, it is telling the adoption of this carbon reduction scheme can decrease significantly the speed of climate change. According to a plethora of studies, such weather phenomenon is occurring at an alarmingly pace, which, if not properly addressed, will likely threaten the existence of the entire of species on the Earth. Furthermore, one of the main occasions of atmospheric pollution is the exhaust fumes from private vehicles. Consequently, should we be unable to reduce carbon footprint, Holocene extinction will be likely inevitable as suggested by many scientists. And certainly, no economic deficiency can be comparable to such environmental catastrophe.
in conclusion, despite the fact that vehicle-free days can effect some declines in business, it is imperative to minimize the release of greenhouse gases from automobiles as much as possible. Otherwise, later generations might never have a chance to remedy our mistakes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ses, especially in the shipping sector. it is freight service that is at the core ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('alarmingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('pace') instead of another adjective.
...such weather phenomenon is occurring at an alarmingly pace, which, if not properly addressed, will...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...e to such environmental catastrophe. in conclusion, despite the fact that vehic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51071428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12568155833 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8954729736 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230402814239 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660781249724 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865674465043 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141091016226 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846292179539 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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