Progress is best made through discussion among people who have contrasting points of views.
Although all humans are physically alike, we defer greatly in the way we thing and in the way we address matters. Since we are independent in our thinking, we cannot always concur with one another hence, we will always have people with contrasting point of views. Having a contrasting point of view in itself is not a bad thing because all our subtle nuances are germane to our progress as humans. However, different notions require different approaches and in some instances, we would have to put our differences aside and reach a consensus in order to make progress. Otherwise, instead of making any meaningful progress we would have nothing but a state of anarchy but nevertheless, the best of progress are made when people with variance of views have discuss together.
First, as the world progresses, technological advancement is also on the increase and more sophisticated equipment and machineries are being discovered. Things that were once posited as facts are now obsolete due to the fact that people with their contrasting points of views came and challenge previously accepted standards. For example, it was once believed that the sun revolves round the earth (geocentric model) and for a long time, people lend credibility to the claim until an Italian man named Galileo, Galilei through assiduously observing astrological phenomenal, substantiated a contrasting point of view that the earth actually revolves round the sun 9heliocentric model).
In addition, to the previous example about how his contrasting point of view has brought about a tremendous progress in science, the Wright brother also through defiling as odds against what was generally accepted posited that it was possible to fly an object that was denser than air. Their opinion clearly contrasted what people believed then and others even denigrated their supposition, but today we have the airplane with which we can travel the world.
Nevertheless, although the previous cases show the nuances in our point can bolster progress, this does not change the fact that we live in a versatile world with variance in each sectors. Hence, the requirements in each sectors definitely defers and a perfect example is the security sector. In the military adherence to plan is very paramount to the success of an operation because if everyone one decides to follow their opinion of what ought to be done, it will only jeopardize the success of the operation.
Lastly, the freedom we enjoy in some part of the world currently is due to the fact that some set of people with contrasting opinion who believed things should be done different stood with what they believed even though it was a sharp contrast to the generally accepted norm. For example, Nelson Mandela of South African believed that all men should be free and he fought for what he believed in, even though that landed him in jail. He later became the first black South African president.
In conclusion, although some situations warrants that we put our differences away temporarily to reach a consensus in order to make meaningful progress, but notwithstanding this, best progresses are made when people of contrasting opinion have discussions.
- The value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments 58
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- The value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments 58
- Imaginative works such as novels plays films fairy tales and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experience than do factual accounts Because the creators of fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on it literally the 83
- Progress is best made through discussion among people who have contrasting points of views 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2663.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12115384615 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81465877045 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496153846154 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 818.1 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3346222625 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.647058824 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5882352941 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304354327528 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093924487429 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940114903989 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152721945449 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814360658282 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.