The line chart shows average attendance at the cinema among various age groups in the US
from 2000 to 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph depicts how many people went to the cinema in four different age-group categories in America over eleven years, beginning in 2000.
In general, it can be seen that the typical number of cinemagoers experienced an upward trend; however, it was quite erratic. In addition, the 15–24 age group had the largest figure over the time given.
In 2000, the 15–24 age group had the biggest figure, at about 16%. Then it saw a consistent growth to 33% in 2004 before it had a drop to 31% in the following year. Between 2005 and 2020, this number had two-time increases, two-time decreases, and two-time stables. After that, it reached a peak of 68% in the middle of the year 2010 before falling to 52% in 2011. In the first five years of this survey, the 7–14 age group fluctuated between 10% and 16%, then it rose considerably to 30% in 2007 before decreasing to 24% in 2018 and rising again to 39%. In 2011, it came back to the 2007 figure.
Meanwhile, the 25–35 age group grew steadily from 4% in 2000 to 24% in 2005. In the remaining time given, it suffered an unstable period of 19% to 32%. Although people who belong to the 35 and over age group had a limited proportion at the beginning of the survey at about 2%, it had a constant rise in the whole period given and reached the figure of 13% in the last year.
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