The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
history shows us how people have always believed in having leaders, representing their interests, form some sort of governing body, to look after its subjects. Monarchy, being one of the first form of governments seen in the history of man, shows hoe how the ordinary masses always put their faith on their leaders to ensure their wellbeing. Even in today's world, there are numerous instances which show us that a country's leaders are responsible for the well-being of its citizens.
Firstly, The govenrment of responsible for looking at the well-being of the countries citizens. Democracies, being the most evidemt form of govenmrnt these day, is formed by the common masses who elect govenment officials, who they entrust to fulfill their basic needs. Secondly, at the most fundamental level, the govenment of a country is responsible for providing its people with basic amenities such as access to food and clean water, good education systems, and affordable healthcare and housing facilities. It should also see to it that new job opportunities are created with the growing population, and the citizen are well employed, with fair wages. Moreover, the role of a country's government becomes even more important when it comes to protecting the rights of its citizens. Ordinary people look up to the govenment officials to pass various laws to ensure safe living conditions. Now-a-days, we can often see people organising protests, campaigns, candle light marches when their rights are violated. This acts as a representation of their disappointment towards the government not being able to fulfill its role. All these instances show how the well being of citizens effectively lies in the hands of its leaders who form the government.
Another significant situation which can provide insights on the effectiveness of a country's leaders is when there is conflict between two or more nations, or even between different communities within the same nation. The role of the country's leader is to resolve conflicts and political tensions arising between nations. Such strains can lead to worsening of peaceful relations between countries, and in worst csaes, it might even lead to wars. Not only millions of people serving in the front lines die in these brutal incidents, but also numerous people perish due to poverty, hunger, and downfall of proper living conditions, as seen in the two World Wars. On the other hannds, tensions may also arise when there is conflict between various religious groups, or people of different faiths residing in the same nation. For example, India witnesses religious riots throughout the country in the early tewnty-first century. Thus, the effectiveness of a countries leaders lie in resolving conflicts and accomodating differences between different communities to ensure safe living conditions of its subjects.
In conclusion, we can see the well being of the citizens is of paramount importance to the government of a country. Ensuring safe living conditions, healthcare, housing, education and employment is one of the sole reasons for the existence of the leaders of a country. Hence, it can br rightly inferred that the well-being of the people is a measure of the effectiveness of the country's leaders.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: History
...l-being of that countrys citizens. history shows us how people have always believe...
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Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble for the well-being of its citizens. Firstly, The govenrment of responsible f...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...eing the most evidemt form of govenmrnt these day, is formed by the common masses who ele...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29906542056 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93269181508 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472897196262 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 843.3 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6754317756 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.260869565 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2608695652 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374161433722 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129489309537 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178988212528 0.0758088955206 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326074109755 0.150359130593 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.267977004175 0.0667264976115 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: History
...l-being of that countrys citizens. history shows us how people have always believe...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble for the well-being of its citizens. Firstly, The govenrment of responsible f...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...eing the most evidemt form of govenmrnt these day, is formed by the common masses who ele...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29906542056 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93269181508 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472897196262 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 843.3 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6754317756 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.260869565 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2608695652 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374161433722 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129489309537 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178988212528 0.0758088955206 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326074109755 0.150359130593 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.267977004175 0.0667264976115 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.