These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent decades, popularity of sports has skyrocketed. Critics argue that spending hard earned income on live matches is a wastage of funds however, I believe the opposite. This essay will discuss the benefits of using money on such tournaments before venturing a logical conclusion.
Due to the personal choice of the people, they prefer to go to watch such events in stadium rather than watching it on television. Satisfaction of an individual is something which cannot be compromised, as everyone wants to enjoy their favorite sports as audience. They always prefer to support their favorite team and players with their physical presence in the ground, which boost the confidence of the team. For instance, in football club matches, home team always has the advantages because their fans support them with full of energy which helps them to win the games in their home ground.
Another big reason of spending money on such occasion is that it helps in developing the infrastructure of that sport in the particular country. Although amount of ticket is too high for matches, but all these funds are used to develop and train the players for big sports events. To exemplify, the “Board of Control for Cricket in India” charges huge amount of money for game passes from the public, but all this income is used to provide better quality equipment and training to the players as a result Indian cricket team has established reputation across the world.
Summing up with all above statements, people are disbursing income with their own wish which ultimately provides benefits to sports team and its members who are working hard to win games for their nation. Thus, there is no harm of spending funds on such exhibitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02083333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59665583545 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4944901072 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132800811476 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532926576803 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408665666881 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079785782019 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388677489737 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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