In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
It is totally acceptable that the job of the begginer is very important for inquiring any case. According to sentence given above, before concluding the final outcome, the beggining data should be very precise for working on further operation.
In the initial stage of any inquiry or investigation, one needs to collect certain clues for the further operation. It is the crucial stage when no one is knowing the whole matter. One needs to study the whole scenario starting from the begginig and gather the information about the people and places who are the part of the inquiry.
Let's take an example of a crime investigation case. Suppose, the phone rings at the crime office and one officer picks up the call. He then come to know about the information that there has occured a murder in the New York city. At this time all they have is just a news that someone got murdered there.The officer is not even knowing about the person who got killed there. So It is an important task for them to go to the crime place and collect the data like fingerprints, blood and all.
We can assume an other scenario of the news reporter. Before giving any kind of news, news reporters visit different places, meet different people and by this way they collect the data regarding the upcoming news. The data then gets analysed and filtered for the final headline. By this way it is an important to first gather the data before concluding any news.
However, it is also a crucial role for the expert who contribute in the final stage of any inquiry by taking an example of court Judge. So after the above discussion, I am agree with the statement
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this period most of the complaints re 55
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs 50
- The following appeared as a recommendation by a committee planning a ten year budget for the city of Calatrava The birthrate in our city is declining in fact last year s birthrate was only one half that of five years ago Thus the number of students enroll 60
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se for working on further operation. In the initial stage of any inquiry or i...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...on. It is the crucial stage when no one is knowing the whole matter. One needs to study th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...on. It is the crucial stage when no one is knowing the whole matter. One needs to study th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces who are the part of the inquiry. Lets take an example of a crime investig...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ho are the part of the inquiry. Lets take an example of a crime investigatio...
^^^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ity. At this time all they have is just a news that someone got murdered there.The off...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... a news that someone got murdered there.The officer is not even knowing about the p...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a like fingerprints, blood and all. We can assume an other scenario of the n...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
..., blood and all. We can assume an other scenario of the news reporter. Before g...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the data before concluding any news. However, it is also a crucial role for t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ge. So after the above discussion, I am agree with the statement
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65635738832 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4566000607 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7159706395 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111204410157 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367910760669 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541146715348 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656073149729 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382203405559 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se for working on further operation. In the initial stage of any inquiry or i...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...on. It is the crucial stage when no one is knowing the whole matter. One needs to study th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...on. It is the crucial stage when no one is knowing the whole matter. One needs to study th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces who are the part of the inquiry. Lets take an example of a crime investig...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ho are the part of the inquiry. Lets take an example of a crime investigatio...
^^^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ity. At this time all they have is just a news that someone got murdered there.The off...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... a news that someone got murdered there.The officer is not even knowing about the p...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a like fingerprints, blood and all. We can assume an other scenario of the n...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
..., blood and all. We can assume an other scenario of the news reporter. Before g...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the data before concluding any news. However, it is also a crucial role for t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ge. So after the above discussion, I am agree with the statement
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65635738832 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4566000607 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7159706395 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111204410157 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367910760669 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541146715348 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656073149729 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382203405559 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.