Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.
Over the past three decades , there has been a surge in the global population who has committed various kinds of violent crimes . Although , some people in the justice and judiciary department propose death penalty , In my opinion , it is important to evaluate the degree of crime that has been done , before making any impertinent decisions.
A considerable number of countries across the globe , has very stringent laws regarding violent crimes . Majority of these nations , indeed follow religious and conventional laws to suppress such inhuman activities . As a matter of fact , a study report published by the United Nations has confirmed that capital punishment as a solution, has had a tremendous positive impact in a society. Passing such strict rules would make people aware of the consequences of their actions that prompts them to sway from wrongdoings . Also, the global challenge of terrorism , would well be under control . A relevant example would be countries like China and Saudi Arabia , which are know to have such rules, eventually where act of terror is minimal.
However , does that mean intending such a verdict without much investigation is an efficient remedy ? It is important to investigate the act of violent crime that helps in gathering accurate and reasonable facts which aids in determining the nature , degree and the real motivation of people involved in committing crimes. Apart from this notion , since we tend to move away from moral obligations in some point of our life , it is important to rectify our mistakes and to be aware of the impact it could have on our family and the society . In such cases , wrongdoers stand a chance of living their life again if they are sent to rehabilitation centers .
In conclusion , even though death penalty is a certain way to reduce large amount of crimes , in my opinion I would suggest to evaluate the crime as stated above and to restore the sense of humanity to people , who involve in crimes by altering their negative notions , that makes them to live their life guilt free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ehabilitation centers . In conclusion , even though death penalty is a certain ...
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...mount of crimes , in my opinion I would suggest to evaluate the crime as stated above and to restor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02064896755 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73534250132 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1729605964 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18847657135 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552088495747 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062893543501 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124094984549 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715496232039 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Over the past three decades , there has been a surge in the global po...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ommitted various kinds of violent crimes . Although , some people in the justice a...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rious kinds of violent crimes . Although , some people in the justice and judiciar...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...diciary department propose death penalty , In my opinion , it is important to eval...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...nt propose death penalty , In my opinion , it is important to evaluate the degree ...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e the degree of crime that has been done , before making any impertinent decisions...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ble number of countries across the globe , has very stringent laws regarding viole...
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... stringent laws regarding violent crimes . Majority of these nations , indeed foll...
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...olent crimes . Majority of these nations , indeed follow religious and conventiona...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...laws to suppress such inhuman activities . As a matter of fact , a study report pu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...inhuman activities . As a matter of fact , a study report published by the United ...
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...at prompts them to sway from wrongdoings . Also, the global challenge of terrorism...
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... Also, the global challenge of terrorism , would well be under control . A relevan...
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... terrorism , would well be under control . A relevant example would be countries l...
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...be countries like China and Saudi Arabia , which are know to have such rules, even...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...like China and Saudi Arabia , which are know to have such rules, eventually where ac...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere act of terror is minimal. However , does that mean intending such a verdict...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cts which aids in determining the nature , degree and the real motivation of peopl...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ommitting crimes. Apart from this notion , since we tend to move away from moral o...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...al obligations in some point of our life , it is important to rectify our mistakes...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...could have on our family and the society . In such cases , wrongdoers stand a chan...
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r family and the society . In such cases , wrongdoers stand a chance of living the...
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Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... they are sent to rehabilitation centers . In conclusion , even though death pe...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ehabilitation centers . In conclusion , even though death penalty is a certain ...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ain way to reduce large amount of crimes , in my opinion I would suggest to evalua...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest evaluating'.
Suggestion: suggest evaluating
...mount of crimes , in my opinion I would suggest to evaluate the crime as stated above and to restor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... restore the sense of humanity to people , who involve in crimes by altering their...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rimes by altering their negative notions , that makes them to live their life guil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02064896755 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73534250132 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1729605964 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18847657135 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552088495747 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062893543501 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124094984549 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715496232039 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.