12.03.2022: Fewer people do farming work in rural areas. WHy? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?
Nowadays, many young people are not keen on farming and try to avoid working in the agriculture sector. To the best of my knowledge, there are various reasons behind this phenomenon, and why there should be more young farmers.
There are two main reasons for this tendency. First of all, it relates to career prospects and income when they do not have a high income and stable crops. This is because farming work depends on many factors, for instance, drought, flood, or lack of water are the main factors causing crop failure and great damage losses in output, productivity, and capital. Moreover, in the advanced technology era, living in urban areas have more potential to apply for a better job, high salary, or satisfaction in the workplace which is not as hard as a farmer.
Despite the aforementioned reasons, young adults should be incentivized to become farmers. First, farming has been and will always be one of the most important sectors of society because rice or wheat which maintains human lives and health is a staple food for people. Therefore,
a shortage in personnel could lead to a worldwide crisis. which only prevent if there is a sufficient supply of manpower to carry out the production. In addition, thanks to the development of technology help farmers reduce the time to plant and create more profit. Also, technological improvements in agriculture can increase excess productivity so that the poor and needy can be saved and provide them with a decent standard of living.
In conclusion, although agricultural work has not only generated an unstable income but also had few opportunities, the young generation is thought to hand in hand to boost the cult. It can be predicted that the younger generation will make a great revolution in agriculture in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80739301765 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3420036133 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20318363229 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585898702631 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677585420658 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109520117521 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869266170487 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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