In education and employment, some people work harder than others.
Why do some people work harder?
Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In comtemporary society, it is worth noticing that a number of employees contribute more effort their workplace than others, especially in educational fields. Personally, i totally agree that working hard is beneficial for individuals and organisations. This paper will also be looking at the roots of this situation.
There are several reasons why people hard working. The main reason is that having a strong desire to get promoted in their workplace. Also, these people who are ambition, they go to work with one ultimate goal that is achive the highest position that thay wish for, they be willing to exert their time and effort at work in hope on receving promotion in return. The other reason, in a group of people receiving pay rate based on hours, so the more they work, the higher income they receive. Therefore, striving to work as many hours as possible. In other hand they need to earn more money and accumulate their home.
Apart from the abovementioned reasons, being hard woking will do more good than harm. The first reason, employees working hard have a chance to learn more and earn gain more experience. In addition, these people become more patient and able to work under pressure as well as deal with a significant amount of workload. Additionally, once is that complete their tasks so gradually turning into a better version of themselves. Futher reason, organsation will be have more benefited from diligent employees, when a staff member work hard their workplace generate more productivity, this is because efficiency of company boosted to leading to higher profits.
Taking everything into consideration, the fact that people hard working has been happening alertly due to first is to get promoted in their workplace and other is accumulate their home, so i think these are good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accumulated'.
Suggestion: accumulated
...romoted in their workplace and other is accumulate their home, so i think these are good. ...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and other is accumulate their home, so i think these are good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07357859532 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72102304264 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.189939085 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253568883186 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938401449104 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061542544194 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161400133071 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039009797409 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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