Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When the issue of career comes into view, there exists conflicting opinions. Many people hold the notion that people who get a job at an early age and continue doing it are willing to enjoy their career life. From my perspective, I am in complete agreement with this viewpoint for the following reasons.
People are likely to have a satisfying career life once they have been loyal to their job. Firstly, it is the stability that makes their career satisfying. In other words, when people keep doing their occupation from an early age, they have adapted to the work environment and the way it works. Moreover, the stability also gives them a stable earning. As a result, it helps people to get an enjoyable career life without much thought. Furthermore, choosing a job early and attempting to keep doing it helps workers get promotion and job opportunities easily. To be more specific, if people are engaged with their job for a long time, they are inclined to get promoted or be given attractive job potentials. Take China as an illustration. Reportedly, a survey from a local business has recorded that more than 70% of people who have a long time working enjoy their career due to the promotions and advantages that the company gives to them. This example directly suggests that those who are permanent workers seem to get a pleasant career.
However, there are some contrasting views that changing jobs frequently are more enjoyable. Some people believe that regularly changing their jobs gives them chances to experience a variety of occupations; hence, they can easily adapt to different conditions and work environments as well as being flexible. Besides, when trying different careers, they can finally get the job that they always want, which is the most enjoyable work ever. Nevertheless, switching jobs frequently means people are facing the instability of life. Specifically, when people always change their job, they are not able to get a stable source of money; consequently, it is difficult for them to maintain their living. That means getting a job which is stable is a vital element in satisfying the career.
In conclusion, people who get their job early and can maintain it often have an inclination to feel more pleasant with their career than those who make frequent changes in jobs due to the stability and promotions they get from their work. However, people should also consider their hobbies before being engaged with a stable career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98058252427 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66381919406 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1193467328 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414980544195 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137466565327 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978434428671 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285030333896 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042068526009 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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