Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing sports teaches people important lessons about life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, Chinese government begin to advocate people to participate in sports nationwide which leads to an increasing concern on how sports effect the life quality of people. And the concern brings about the issue that whether playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life. In my opinion, sports do help us to learn more about life and I am going to develop my argument by presenting three aspects of the influence of sports on people.
Firstly, sports teach us the value of teamwork. With the increasing complexity in today's tasks, dealing with problems alone no longer works. For example, The Chicago Bulls did not win a single championship in Jordan's first 6 years in NBA. After Jordan get helps from Pippen and Rodman, and adopted triangle offense which puts emphasis on cooperation, the Chicago Bulls become the most formidable team of the league which won 6 NBA championship in 8 years. It proves that in sports games, teamwork bring individual's talent together and result in more effective work.
Secondly, sports teach us the spirit of Never Give Up. We saw hundreds of matches without producing a winner until the last minute. For example, The Chicago Bulls did not win until Jordan shot the last ball against Jazz in 1998 NBA finals. The Spanish football team did not beat Netherlands before Inesta score the winning goal during the extension of the final match in the South Africa World Cup this year. These incidents give us lesson on one thing that never give up until fighting to the end.
At last, sports can enhance one's leadership. He used to be the one who claimed to be the leader of the Lakers, who drove the most talent center in NBA league away, who was always demanding the ball without share it, who had fruitless seasons for years. However, the one began to change after years' failure. He no longer criticized his teammates and started to encourage them. He started to assist his teammates to score instead of working alone. He always had the courage to challenge everything which blocked his way to success. He finally acquires the art of leadership and gets the NBA championship again this year. He is Kobe Bryant.
In conclusion, sports do not only teach us to build up our body muscles but some more important qualities we need in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82487309645 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43632745404 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571065989848 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.118563595 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160092851395 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047096487977 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706752092529 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976244505986 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816653702951 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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