Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Spending a lot of time watching sports on TV and following their favorite team will have a negative impact on one’s life.
Nowadays, humankind face with different challenges that may adversely influence its life. So, finding ways to reduce these negative effects may help ones to overcome the stress and tension that ones endure. Following some favorite activities can be an appropriate solution. This could be done by themselves or watching through media including TV, social media etc. While some people may think that watching sports on TV will have negative impact on one's life I strongly believe that watching such program will lead to positive outcomes.
First, people are buzzy with their work other important issues in their life, which make it impossible for them to playing it or even going to stadium and watching sports. Since watching sports could help people with their physical health, for those fans of sports watching sports could be an entertainment that leads to their mental health. For example, someone fan of soccer watching TV could be hilarious specially if their favorite team win. This happiness help them to release that they endured during the day.
Second, people by watching sports on TV can improve their social friendship which help people find some ones with similar interest. For example, there are to famous soccer team in my country, Iran, that everyone in my country is fan of one of these tow team, Esteghlal and Perspolish, When these tow team have soccer game some fan plan to watch the match on TV together within a fan group. During the match they talk together and laugh they also sing their team's song which bring the positive vibes in the whole place. After the game they also can interact with each other they also share their idea on the other subject matter including their daily challenges and ask a guide to solve their problem. This kind of help can broaden people's friendship circle
Consequently, while some people are in the believe that watching sports on TV will have a negative effect in peoples' life, it seems to me that watching sports on TV programs will have a positive impact, which can not only improve their mental health but also improve their friendly relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fans'.
Suggestion: fans
...eir mental health. For example, someone fan of soccer watching TV could be hilariou...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Consequently, while some people are in the believe that watching sports on TV will have a ...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...sequently, while some people are in the believe that watching sports on TV will have a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96056338028 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32462474015 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4043860035 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326361029755 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116089584182 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712519385152 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224564171728 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506996798486 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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