In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?
It has been said that people in developed and developing countries gain benefits from economic upturn, but the rich in first-world countries feels less happy than they used to be. This issue will cite significant causes and solutions which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, one of remarkable causes of why wealthy people settling in cosmopolitan area are not completely satisfied these days is that they have to deal with the excessive workload. People in certain professions such as manager and entrepreneur fully spend their time to work rather than take leisure time. Despite obtaining stable finance, they still need earn more to maintain social status. Furthermore, the high living standard puts society in trouble to fulfill the expectation. Apart from primary job, they undertake painstaking effort, where the employees tend to take another job and stays late in office, with the aim of preparing investment in the forthcoming lifetime.
Moving to the solutions, to consider a balance between professional and private life seemingly hampers the drawback of this phenomenon. Gathering with family and beloved ones could create meaningful life in which this relates on perception that money cannot buy us happiness. In addition, people should be more concern on improving mental awareness. In the middle of hustle-bustle activities, sharing with communities hinders stress from workforce pressure. Needless to say, individuals showing better self-assurance could feel more pleased to enjoy the meaningful life.
In conclusion, the remarkable causes of rich people being unhappy are the increase of work pressure and the fulfillment of high living standard. However, to tackle this view, having work-life balance and improving personal's mental health should be taking into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56834532374 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8470126594 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665467625899 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1775666198 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186543486249 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534363243611 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757723643345 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118915710477 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103027311078 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.