Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?
There is frequently an expectation placed on all young adults to engage in unpaid service to benefit others in their community as responsible members of a progressive society. While there are some certain drawback of this tendency. I believe that the benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, the disadvantages of this mostly revolve around how much time a young adult would devote to helping others. in this time very useful to improve their current skills, learn new skills, enhancing academic qualifications and then applying for highly in demand positions. also youth age at which youngsters allow enjoyment without being tied down with the responsibilities. spending the little leisure time that they get in helping the community would steal from them the sweetest and most joyful period of youth.
Despite certain disadvantages mentioned above, I would argue that doing charity work has more advantages. First, young people can become the leaders and innovate of tomorrow. for example, after doing a huge amount of volunteer work she can now confidently stand in the hall to make a presentation with roughly 500 people.second, They can learning the new values from their live without money,They will learn to empathize with each other, be sensitive to each other’s needs and make choices that benefit one and all and it is also help the quality of life more and more improve and reduce the crimes.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the advantages of taking part in volunteer work without paying money outweigh the negative effects that it has.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12062256809 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76110002235 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.7207431291 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.636363636 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207056290068 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718128027 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362008946357 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103833339954 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488649447359 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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