Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, in many countries around the world, especially some developing countries, who want to turn their countries into a top sporting nation prioritized investing in specialized facilities for high-level athletes over those that cater to the general public. Although having all of the necessary facilities available for everyone to utilize is crucial, I believe that having specialized facilities for elite athletes is still a good development.
On the one hand, providing sport and exercise facilities for general public use allows people to enjoy the benefits of playing sport which bring long term benefits to a country. When given suitable and quality facilities and equipment, citizens are able to improve their health by doing exercise in the right ways. It also help to improving the overall health condition of the public population, a government will be able to spend less budget on healthcare while also increasing people's levels of happiness.
On the other hand, the investment to building more specialized facilities for training talented people can help to maximize their potential. This is because top-level athletes have a lot of potential to develop themselves further towards world class level. After that, they can optimize their performance in global competitions and are more likely to achieve rewards and success in sports, making great contributions to national achievements in this field. The most real example is Kenya, one of the poorest countries in the world but also one of the countries with the most athletics Olympic medals and they employed the athlete's popularity and success to gradually boost the nation's economy.
In conclusion, even while public sporting facilities are very vital, specialized training facilities are far more crucial for nations that want to create top-level athletes, who can bring honors and glory for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43835616438 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80818576659 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7533998679 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.8 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343564223586 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12726088775 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682242525098 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203624626934 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615705676492 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.