Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
In modern society, where spiritual values are appreciated, art and its various forms have been receiving more attention of not only community but also goverment. Some notions suppose that governmental expenditures on art extravagant and should be utilised for other purposes such as healthcare and farewell. Although I am among the supporters, it is undeniable that art is a domain worthing more investment.
Arts is considered as an activities for the purpose of amusment and entertaiment, in lieu of which authorities need to focus on social benefits. To exemplify for this argument, traffic infrastructure is one of the most arduous problems requiring abundant budget. For the sake of citizens, authorities should switch the spending on art activities to upgrading traffic system such as erecting bridges, expanding highway with more lanes, setting tram in order to facilitate the local transportation.
However it is undeniable that arts is an effective way to preserve and promote cultural values of a country. Thanks to antique exhibitions and museums, which create chances for young generation to study their own ethical history and belief of their formers. Frequent displays of traditional arts also help in the process of cultural promotion and spreading featured customs to foreigners, which is evaluated as a efficacious way to push the local tourism.
Taking all pros and cons of art into account, I suggest that although being not in the list of priorities, art needs to be cardinally taken care of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an activity; activities
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Suggestion: However,
... facilitate the local transportation. However it is undeniable that arts is an effect...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04793873881 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3953122139 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105946588909 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407904248686 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269463441619 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645930072103 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243273306715 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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