“Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.”
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is often argued that getting a degree enables people to find a well-paid job while others suppose that it is not an obligatory thing to graduate the university. Although going straight into work helps employees to gain the stockpile of experience, I put a premium on the educational system as I am sure tat it gives a great opportunity to acquire some fundamental knowledge on the workplace.
On the one hand, the role of a higher education is of utmost importance as it helps people to get bundles of useful information that could be applicable on the workplaces. The point is that, the more useful knowledge an employee got in the university, the more chances he has in order to climb the career ladder. This, in turn, gives him the opportunity to get great salary. For instance, one of my friends had a job in one o Russian companies and he had to work with collegues and some of them did not have a degree. Because of it the boss and my friend had some struggles as those could not carry out their work on a higher level.
On the other hand, in the modern world getting experience takes the front seat in the most of labourmarkets. That is to say, that a lot of bosses prefer hiring people having practical skills to academic knowledge. Probably, in most cases it is related with soft skills because the better people could work in a close team or establish a good rapport with his colleagues, the more advantages they have before the eyes of emloyers. For example, nowadays in most of advanced countries such as Japan employers put more emphasis on soft skills rather than having a degree.
In conclusion, although going straight into work without a degree can sometimes help people to find an interesting job and to gain needed experience, thanks to degree people could get a well-paid job
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63125 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68674407974 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5624589356 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245718215461 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859450094524 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645652691499 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161380460478 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586643532925 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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