Many people decide on a career early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
Although it is believed by some that choosing a profession at a premature age and sticking with it is more pleasurable as compared to overage determination. In my opinion, I deem that, luckily this kind of decision may help people in ascertaining conditions. However, people are not aware of such things, and they might take judgments, and after some age, they regret their past certainty.
On the one hand, one prominent reason why individuals prefer their occupation at an early age is that they acknowledge and set their goals for future work. In other words, some people concentrate on their clear career path. Hence, they work according to their goals to thoroughly reach their profession. Another point to consider is that people's aim is clear about their work so, they are not distracted by other things or activities. Therefore, it helps them to boost their confidence in their achievements.
On the other hand, there are myriad obvious reasons for people not to start their job in the early years. Firstly, individuals in society are not mature about taking decisions in their earlier times. To elaborate, people do not know what they want, they are not aware of their abilities, strength, likes, and dislikes. Thus, this type of career decision makes people's life detrimental in their later years, and they also feel regret about it. Secondly, younger people cannot make decisions at a certain age because they are not mature enough. Consequently, whether parents have the right to their judgments or they are influenced by peers.
People can make their working life comfortable by doing such kinds of things, such as being fascinated with work and spending quality time with friends or family to equally balance their work life. In addition, people can make a good environment surrounding their place. As a result, they can do work without any pressure, anxiety, or stress.
In recapitulation, it is great for people to make their decision towards career life but this could be helpful at a specific age level, while in later years judgments can give more job opportunities to individuals which might be worthwhile for their job profile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0702247191 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70703021068 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5930442617 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.277777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355532649698 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120414440443 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629651390951 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205155058099 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691021258584 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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