The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station over the past year our late night news programme as devoted increase time to national news and less time to weather and local news during this. Most of the complaints we see from viewers were concerned with us stations coverage of weather and local news in addition a local business that used to advertise during a late night news programme has just cancelled the advertising contract with us therefore in order to attract more views study programme and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues we should restore a time devoted to weather and local news to his former level
Accordining to the memorandum from the business manager of a television station, if the company wants to increase their views and not lose any more adversting revenues than they should restore the original plan of showing the weather and local news rather than national news. This arrguments rests on series of unpersuassive assummption and it is not logicaaly correct. This could be proved.
First, it could have happen that the local businesses that were adversiting before have shut down and they are no longer providing any buisness. This could be a reason why they are not adversiting any more. It could also happen that the news channel increased the cost of adversitment, so the local business shifted to other mode of adversitiment.
So, without knowing that are the business still running or is their a price increase by the news channel it would be illogical to change the program to local news and weather reports.
Secondly, the complain could be from the same small popluation of the people. It could also happen that only a small amount of people are interested in the local news and weather reports and they are only complaing about it. So, without knowing how many people are compaling and it are these people the same people or not the news channnel should not change the program.
Thirdly, if the news channel only shows the local news than their viewership is only restricted to local people and only the local business will adversitise with them. By showing the national wide news the news channel could have viewership from all across the nation and they can earn more advertisment money as more business would be willing to make contract with them. So, the company should think about the bigger picture and not just about the smaller picture of adversiting the local business. In the longer run the news channer would surely make a profit.
Fourth, the reason the news channel is losing the viewership and advertisment revenue could be the reason that the news which the channel is showing is not the latest or is not enaging. To increase the viewership the news channel should show the latest news and deliver it in a more engaing maner.
The news channel should look at all the matter which is presented above and check the facts before taking any action. They should follow the suggestion which are mention above. To increase the profit the news channel should cover a wider area and provide news in more details.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 418 350
No. of Characters: 1987 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.522 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.754 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.375 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.953 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.367 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...could be proved. First, it could have happen that the local businesses that were adv...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...at are the business still running or is their a price increase by the news channel it...
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Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...l news and weather reports. Secondly, the complain could be from the same small popluation...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ng how many people are compaling and it are these people the same people or not the...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... business will adversitise with them. By showing the national wide news the news ...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'channels'.
Suggestion: channels
... it in a more engaing maner. The news channel should look at all the matter which is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84928229665 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42176290241 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411483253589 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1384590662 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.684210526 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282532030709 0.218282227539 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102314857968 0.0743258471296 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727673847044 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16790601398 0.128457276422 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054354538377 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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