Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In recent years, there has been an upward tendency in the rate of people starting to work and study at home. From my perspective, I completely believe this is a beneficial trend. In this essay, I will shed light on the reasons behind this phenomenon and provide a number of examples.
There are two main reasons when it comes to the benefits for students. To begin with, thanks to the cheaper and more accessible technology offering nowadays, children can easily gain a wealth of knowledge merely via a click of button. Furthermore, homeschooling is becoming more and more popular because of COVID-19 pandemic, which not only gives juveniles the safety but it also does not impede their learning progress. By way of illustration, the government in Vietnam imposed the distance learning regulations for 2 years without any detrimental impact on academic results. On the contrary, it even showed the more beneficial outcome.
Turn to the remainder, more and more adults alter to work at home owing to the fact that it makes them more comfortable and under less pressure. To be more specific, they can proactively schedule their workload which gives them more time to relax and recharge their batteries. Moreover, a majority of people are not able to put up with the rules and environment in several companies and factories. Consequently, they only feel comfortable working at home.
All in all, regardless of a plethora of various views relating to whether working and studying at home are a beneficial development or not. I still wholeheartedly believe that the benefits it brings far outweigh the drawbacks.
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- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 67
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89587176268 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6567543209 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324412192821 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875636632116 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552217663576 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159639515322 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435782709984 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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