Effect of internet.
The most revolutionary thing which has happened in mankind in the last century is the birth of internet. Almost every person in the world is affected directly or indirectly because of the internet. This is why I agree with the statement that use of internet has a mostly positive effect on the life in today's world. The two main reasons for which I think internet has effected positively on todays life are given in subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, as we know, knowledge is power. Internet has given birth to uncountable technologies which are used to gain knowledge. Obviously, because of internet knowledge is at our fingertips. In other words, internet is the reason for the generation of huge amounts of useful data and information. Consequently, from engineering fields upto medical sciences internet has improved everyone. This is best demonstrated by the example of study of near extinct animals. Scientists are now able to predict and determine the factors and affecters which are causing the problem and with the help of solution we are able to calculate solution in much faster way as by connecting with all scientists of similar thinking and finding answers together. If there was no internet the process of keeping the bio diversity in the planet would be much more difficult.
Secondly, internet has improved the quality of life for everyone. The world has become a global village with the advancements in internet and technology. Evidently with the help of internet we are able to use smart home devices like Alexa to control everything, from buying our grocery to dimming the lamp in the living room. Clearly, internet has helped us saving our precious time which we now are able to spend with our loved once. Additionally, because of internet everyone is able to fill their need of money in one or other way. In short, internet has helped by increasing the potential sources of income.
To conclude, not only internet has connected everyone together strongly but also it has impacted in our life in best way possible. It has created most impact positively and that's why I agree with the given statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ink internet has effected positively on todays life are given in subsequent paragraphs...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sciences'' or 'science's'?
Suggestion: sciences'; science's
...y, from engineering fields upto medical sciences internet has improved everyone. This is...
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Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... thinking and finding answers together. If there was no internet the process of ke...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...g room. Clearly, internet has helped us saving our precious time which we now are able...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ly but also it has impacted in our life in best way possible. It has created most impac...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... has created most impact positively and thats why I agree with the given statement. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in short, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0056022409 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7518524346 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7176626128 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.35 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374221052715 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120898367217 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777755971554 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222167974183 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108207048458 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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