Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, many students are suffering from school violence. This action often would mentally and physically damage bullied children. In this essay, I will give some reasons why this phenomenon occurred, and provide a possible solution for dealing with this behavior. First of all, the majority of children who commit acts of bullying are not getting enough consideration and care from, either their teachers or their parents. For this reason, they come up with this strategy, which is bullying other children, to get the attention of other people. In addition, witnessing acts of domestic violence is also a cause of violence at school age. For example, their parents often commit bullied acts, and this makes children more violent. Moreover, their family does not supervise or care for their children. For instance, when children want to talk to their parents about their school, parents often ignore them, because they are often busy with their jobs. Therefore, this will cause resentment in children and transforms into bullying. In addition, I believe that there are several solutions to tackle this problem. Firstly, parents, of course, pay more attention to their children. For example, when their children talk with strangers, their parents have to be always by their side. Furthermore, parents also need to care about what children watch because many children can easily learn bullying through violent films. So, parents need to stay with their children while watching movies or parents can let children watch healthy movies. In conclusion, the action of bullying has many reasons. However, I believe that the attention of parents to their children is the best treatment to solve bullying in school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1386, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to bully'.
Suggestion: to bully
... because many children can easily learn bullying through violent films. So, parents need...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45905043985 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3371000705 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151388621806 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666342865474 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467817249941 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151388621806 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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