Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years. More advantages than disadvantages?
It is true that in the modern days, some people have the tendency to give birth at a later phase of their life. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and the merits of it outweigh the demerits.
There are two main reasons why individuals decide to have offspring at older ages. First and foremost is the stability of finance. As raising a child requires a multitude of different expenses, including healthcare, education, and entertainment, young generations find it a burden since they are not yet capable of being financially independent. In addition, while they have yet to find a stable job with a decent income, they may have to become the only breadwinner of the family since the former generations are now physically and mentally weak and have to rely on them. Another problem is that it will cause a disruption in the career of one person. A child needs the full attention of both parents to grow and contribute value to society, which has a tremendous effect on people who are aiming for a higher career position. It may cause an imbalance in life as people have to simultaneously work and take care of the family. Consequently, it may cause mental issues with the accumulation of stress from finances and raising a child.
In addition, having a child at an older age brings many advantages to parents. First, people can now focus on raising the child. At older ages, individuals are now stable in their finances, so they can not only take care of themselves but also the newborn child with the additional expenses. Furthermore, it is less likely to cause mental issues at this age. Individuals become more mature physically and mentally as they get older since they have overcome hardship and gained experience to the extent that they can face the major problems of having a child.
In conclusion, The detrimental effects on career paths as well as the instability in finance have led to the decision to have a child late. In addition, the benefits of being able to focus on raising the child and being mature enough to do it outweigh the disadvantages of having a child in old age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outweighs'?
Suggestion: outweighs
... child and being mature enough to do it outweigh the disadvantages of having a child in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74184782609 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74761319131 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486413043478 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3812829861 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899113436937 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311822257745 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261601204227 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568931646573 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00952057670057 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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