Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years. More advantages than disadvantages?
It is true that a number of the young generations jump off to other occupations or careers each few years. Although many drawbacks can be seen in finding new jobs, the benefits in a higher salary as well as diverse ones’ experience may outweigh these demerits.
On the one hand, there are two main disadvantages of changing jobs from time to time. First and foremost is the risk of an unstable source of income. As people change jobs, whether for a decent income or the opportunities to stay near their hometown, it is not guaranteed that the job will provide a sufficient salary as well as an opportunity for promotion since they were proved to be not committed to their former careers. Consequently, finances may become a heavy burden for young people. Furthermore, there is risk of being replaced. Youngsters who jumps in different jobs may lacks in deep understanding of one professionals, which may be replaced by another employee with abundant experience and an insightful knowledge of their specialization. A veteran who has a PhD and years of experience may be prioritized over other candidates, can be taken as a good example.
On the other hand, I believe the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages. Firstly, they may have the opportunities to raise their wages faster than the loyal employees. As they get more experienced in their field of working, young people have the privilege to negotiate for higher salaries at a new workplace as they know what is needed to provide for the employer. Due to a prominent survey, an average raise of 5 percent in salary for each job in the same field people change. Secondly, changing jobs or career brings huge opportunities to diversify your experience. As many scholars believe that knowledge is power, having a wide-range of insight is a powerful key to bring new innovative ideas and special views which may benefit the young generations in many ways. Consequently, they may have the chance to become successful both mentally and materially.
In conclusion, despite the risk of having an unstable wage and being easily replaced, the opportunities in having a higher income and widening the knowledge has outweighed the demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 614, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one professional', 'a professional', or simply 'professionals'?
Suggestion: one professional; a professional; professionals
...jobs may lacks in deep understanding of one professionals, which may be replaced by another emplo...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...e of insight is a powerful key to bring new innovative ideas and special views which may benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0136239782 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99996906438 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528610354223 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2731453893 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217969514233 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655049961504 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483004077646 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110474212008 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723147264597 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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