In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, many people believe that vehicles will be driven automatically and only passengers in it. In my opinion, I firmly hold the views that there are more benefits than drawbacks to this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it exists several disadvantages to the aforementioned trend. First and foremost, all transport will be set up a program to driverless, which drive the car and also address some situations on the road. However, there are several special cases only deal with by human. For example, a car is driving automatic, but on the road suddenly appearing, the program driving automatically can not solve this problem faster than human do. Additionally, the app driverless sometime meets some wrongs when using, which is extremely dangerous for costumers and other transports on the road. To illustrate, if the app has some incorrect with increasing speed, the car will run a high level of speed on the road and maybe lead the serious accident.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that the developing driverless in the future is more advantages for human. The main reason is that the rate of traffic jam in the city will be declined significantly. All transport will be used the same app driverless, which will calculate the speed and cases occur on the road and then address it, leading reduce vehicles on the road. Moreover, the driverless will useful to disability people, who can not drive. This app help them travelling and moving in the life. Additionally, the passengers are more safety and not to face some ricks. To illustrate, if a person drunk alcohols, he or she can go home by using driverless.
In conclusion, while there are still have some drawbacks when using driverless, but I would argue that we gain more than we lose from this trend.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to travel' or 'travel'.
Suggestion: to travel; travel
..., who can not drive. This app help them travelling and moving in the life. Additionally, t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... In conclusion, while there are still have some drawbacks when using driverless, b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77783539106 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4432349689 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269958759045 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830812059174 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669893379587 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154011602247 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681104644095 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to travel' or 'travel'.
Suggestion: to travel; travel
..., who can not drive. This app help them travelling and moving in the life. Additionally, t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... In conclusion, while there are still have some drawbacks when using driverless, b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77783539106 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4432349689 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269958759045 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830812059174 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669893379587 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154011602247 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681104644095 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.