Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that instead of using an inordinate amount of money to repair and prevent old buildings from being ruined, they should be demolished and replaced by modern ones. I totally disagree with this opinion for the reasons outlined below.
To erect new buildings can cost a huge amount of fortune which might lead to a financial downturn in many countries. People assume that fixing antique structures costs a significant deal of money. However, expenses of constructing new ones can be far greater than that since it includes the cost of both knocking old buildings down and substituting them with new ones. In fact, many developing nations such as Vietnam or Thailand had witnessed an economic crisis due to this plan to the point where they had to postpone many construction projects for decades. Clearly, replacing old towers is not always a decent idea.
Restoration is a way for people to preserve their cultural values. As ancient houses and towers are the witnesses of time and history, they not only tell stories of the past through many events once happening there but they also are the most obvious sign of national culture by their decorations and architecture. That is why protecting them from being ruined is an approach to celebrate and preserve the cultural identity of a nation. For example, Gothic architecture has been considered as one of the most typical patterns of culture in France as they spent millions of dollars keeping their famous ancient towers intact through the years.
In conclusion, repairing old buildings can cost a great deal of fortune. Nevertheless, it is still worth the money since it is not only cheaper than erecting new ones but it also is a method to save cultural features from being faded.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are the witnesses of time and history, they not only tell stories of the past t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97278911565 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64983232783 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0736234689 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190514310085 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700676038306 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698917529419 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128895410434 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597359784352 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.