Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both.
Past events sometimes helpful in taking important decisions while sometimes it doesn't. Historical events are evidence of the past of a person, organization's or things and even it helps in deciding whether it is good or not how it is not harmful and much more. Whenever an important decisions are taken they need to be taken with care as it might defame someone or country, harm the future of citizens or country. According to famous personality, "History repeats itself after some time". Whether to do background check or not it depends on how person who does it and how loyal he his towards humanity.
Events are truly important in deciding one's future like for example A Raja a well known politician who was involved in 2G scam of India as master mind. The politician misused the power of ministry in allocating 2G spectrum to organizations without having bid for it. If we had perform some background about the person then we could have avoid occurring such scam which shattered and defamed India on international scale.
While some scammers forge documents to look like its real but still its our duty to do thoroughly check. For example Diamond Merchant Nirav Modi who scammed Punjab National Bank of India to grab huge amount of loan by forging fake documents of assets which his organizations never possessed. Even though the thoroughly check was done but still somehow he managed to corrupt the officials of bank in allocating lump sum amount to his organizations. If, the officials never had the avarice to conduct such scam we would have impeded it.
It, we had done every time background check about how the person was and whether he/she committed any crime. For example Robert Downey Jr who committed crime in his teenage. If, producer had done background check and found about his past then then the producer had lost such extraordinary talent of Robert who was casted as Iran Man in Iron Man movies series and in Marvel Universe.
Some examples do exist in technological hub like Elon Musk who is well known for his extraordinary talent to solve most challenging problems. If, Elon take some initiative to bring a change in society then no one will cast doubt on him about his talent. He has proved his talent in front of world how extraordinary he is.
According to the given examples, it sometime matters to do background check to prevent a catastrophic event but sometimes it doesn't as we might loss some extraordinary talen which is hidden from world. I do personally believe that it depends on who the background checker is and is he willing to take risk by employing the person.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... important decisions while sometimes it doesnt. Historical events are evidence of the ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decision'?
Suggestion: decision
...ul and much more. Whenever an important decisions are taken they need to be taken with ca...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...ns without having bid for it. If we had perform some background about the person then w...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...ns without having bid for it. If we had perform some background about the person then w...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...cuments to look like its real but still its our duty to do thoroughly check. For ex...
^^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g lump sum amount to his organizations. If, the officials never had the avarice to...
^^
Line 4, column 238, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: then
...ckground check and found about his past then then the producer had lost such extraordinar...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent to solve most challenging problems. If, Elon take some initiative to bring a c...
^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Elon) must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...lve most challenging problems. If, Elon take some initiative to bring a change in so...
^^^^
Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t a catastrophic event but sometimes it doesnt as we might loss some extraordinary tal...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83482142857 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72072485746 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5903835039 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146913654639 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493250674798 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552829554162 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803924568548 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435970834301 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... important decisions while sometimes it doesnt. Historical events are evidence of the ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decision'?
Suggestion: decision
...ul and much more. Whenever an important decisions are taken they need to be taken with ca...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...ns without having bid for it. If we had perform some background about the person then w...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...ns without having bid for it. If we had perform some background about the person then w...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...cuments to look like its real but still its our duty to do thoroughly check. For ex...
^^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g lump sum amount to his organizations. If, the officials never had the avarice to...
^^
Line 4, column 238, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: then
...ckground check and found about his past then then the producer had lost such extraordinar...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent to solve most challenging problems. If, Elon take some initiative to bring a c...
^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Elon) must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...lve most challenging problems. If, Elon take some initiative to bring a change in so...
^^^^
Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t a catastrophic event but sometimes it doesnt as we might loss some extraordinary tal...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83482142857 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72072485746 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5903835039 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146913654639 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493250674798 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552829554162 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803924568548 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435970834301 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.