You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the average amount of carbon dioxide emissions released by citizens in four countries which are the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal during the period of 40 years starting from 1967.
Overall, there were upward trends in emitting CO2 from Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007, while the opposite trends were seen in the UK and Sweden in the same years. It is also noticeable, that carbon dioxide emissions in the United Kingdom dominated in four countries during the period shown.
In 1967, the amount of carbon dioxide emitted by the United Kindom was the highest at more than 11 metric tonnes, followed by Sweden has the second place, with nearly 9 metric tonnes. the figures for Italy and Portugal reached at approximately 4 and 1 metric tonnes, respectively. In the following 10 years, there was a significant increase in CO2 emissions from Sweden, Italy, and Portugal were the same at about 2 metric tonnes, whereas, the figure for the United Kingdom stayed unchanged at 11 metric tonnes. By 1987, the amount of carbon dioxide emission in Italy and Portugal had continued to rise to 7 metric tonnes and 3 metric tonnes, in turn. In contrast, the figure for Sweden had significantly declined to 7 metric tonnes and balanced the amount of CO2 in Italy. Similarly, there was a falling trend in the United Kindom to 10 metric tonnes.
By 2007, the average amount of CO2 emissions in the United Kingdom had witnessed a considerable decrease by 2 metric tonnes, however, this figure still remained on the top list, while the figure for Italy had overtaken Sweden in 1987 and reached the second position in 2007, with nearly 8 metric tonnes. By contrast, CO2 emissions in Sweden had fallen to around 5 metric tonnes and stayed the third place with Portugal, at more than 5 metric tonnes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ond place, with nearly 9 metric tonnes. the figures for Italy and Portugal reached ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, similarly, so, still, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83279742765 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48932336249 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424437299035 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 283.868780488 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.881518356 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204462957747 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102011044526 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433725879435 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156513432188 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214243307471 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ond place, with nearly 9 metric tonnes. the figures for Italy and Portugal reached ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, similarly, so, still, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83279742765 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48932336249 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424437299035 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 283.868780488 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.881518356 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204462957747 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102011044526 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433725879435 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156513432188 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214243307471 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.