Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The groundbreaking development of techonology brings a wide range of benefits for both workers and learners. Therefore, many people believe that not only matured adults but also students can work from home because of the low-cost price and accessibility of technology. From my perspective, this trend has both pros and cons which will be presented below.
On the one hand, it could not denied that technology easy people's work and study for some reasons. First, modern technology allows them to access more valuable sources of knowledge, they can download or utilise a great variety of useful applications on their technological devices. Second, modern people could save much time of commuting when they work at home. They even could take advantage of their travelling time for gaining higher work efficiency, as well as lessing traffic risks. Similiarly, students who study online could have more extra time for doing their assignments instead of travelling to their schools every day.
On the other hand, working or studying from home could have some drawbacks which should be considered. The first negatiive point is that people could be isolated from their company communities if they work from home for a long time. This consequence could be right with onlien students when they lack social interactions with teachers and friends through face-to-face meetings. Moreover, working and learning online could cause some health problems due to the long period of exposuring the screen of various technological applicances, for example, laptop, smart phones, tablets. In a recent report, a great number of phone users could encounter with plenty of serve diseases related to this tendency, including optical problems, stress, and obesity because of lack of physical activities.
In a nutshell, the growth of technology is beneficial for most people, especially workers and students who are likely to work from home. However, this tendency could have harmful influences on them. Therefore, people should consider when choosing working and studying online.
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The bar chart shows the number of times per week in 1000s over five weeks that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 73
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
... below. On the one hand, it could not denied that technology easy peoples work and s...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dered. The first negatiive point is that people could be isolated from their comp...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...meetings. Moreover, working and learning online could cause some health problems ...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'phones'?
Suggestion: phones
.... In a recent report, a great number of phone users could encounter with plenty of se...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...e, people should consider when choosing working and studying online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40809968847 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72654196994 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0896141054 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262144815267 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091202873103 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551180220301 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170850903125 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191726231404 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.